Seeing as how the person who typed in Global Watch hasn't taken me up on my offer to edit the final, latest, Re-Edited One Year Anniversary Edition of Global Watch, I'm using the one at the Smashwords webpage.
And, quelle surprise! it still has errors in it.
"Then/than" confusion still reigns (or, as the person who typed in Global Watch might write, "reins").
"Oblivious pitfall" continues to be awesome.
And, one that I didn't point out the first time (but a fan of this blog did): "secret hidden" is redundant.
To repeat: This is what the person who typed in Global Watch considers to be professionally edited.